[原创] [纯词创作]最初的声音，罗密欧与梁山伯

joh111571

2012-3-11 08:36 PM

写得不错哦~~~有少许的感触但是有些地方还不够凸现~~加强咯~~
感觉上很像在说话不懂是不是没曲的关系~~

pears

2012-3-20 05:04 PM

thx for sharing 是谢谢分享的意思加油

`kobs~

2012-3-28 02:57 PM

赞！！

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