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发表于 2011-11-13 11:27 PM |只看该作者

You can easily get a B if you make sure your tenses and grammar are correct.
Though the story is not that interesting, you can still get a A if you can add some descriptions to your characters, how you felt etc.

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发表于 2011-11-14 12:20 PM |只看该作者

回复 XiiaO_QiAngel

我知道，在英文论坛领教过了
MarsNg 发表于 2011-11-12 02:48 PM

哪里的英文论坛？怎么领教？

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发表于 2011-11-14 01:07 PM |只看该作者

回复 13# DejaVu26

lowyat，被酸到很惨

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回复 14# MarsNg 给link来看一下...... 那里的英文也好不到哪里去，还酸人......哈哈

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本帖最后由 MarsNg 于 2011-11-17 06:12 AM 编辑

回复 15# DejaVu26

是吗？有很多英文老师咧。。

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哈哈，天啊，那些取笑人的自己的英文也够烂的...... 老师的也不少语法错误......
我国的英语没得救了......

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发表于 2011-11-14 09:25 PM |只看该作者

I can try to help you but I have to admit though that my English is not superb.
I'm not the best but I get A+'s in exams.
I'll try my best.
To those who are better than me, if you guys find any mistakes that I have made, I apologize.

Please do correct me

By the way:
red means wrong
blue in bracket means my corrections
green means words you should add in
orange means what I'm thinking

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发表于 2011-11-14 09:26 PM |只看该作者

oh and underscores means words you should not have add in

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发表于 2011-11-15 08:55 AM |只看该作者

I know the feeling of lonely(loneliness)
=> I knew how lonely it felt...

because there was no any news (absolutely no news) about him before.
=> because we hadn't been told that there would be a new student in our class.

改不下去了，两个字：难改......